Fate’s 100 Word Challenge #1

Can we finally make a start moaned Susan STOP BUGGING ME!!!!!!!!

Shouted Pete ok ok ok all I wanted to know is when the Easter hunt is going to happen.  The next week…  Finally we can make a start to the Easter hunt I found an egg cried Susan wait where are all the others Pete there aren’t any WHAT so your telling me you spent one whole week hiding one chocolate egg I hate you so much wailed Susan.  The next day… Pete said sorry Susan forgave him they had a picnic together and had cheese and ham sandwiches and lots of chocolate yum yum…

By Fate

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  1. Dear Fate,
    Well done on writing your first 100WC this year! I can’t believe that Pete would spend so long organizing the Easter egg hunt and only hide 1 egg! Hopefully he will learn from this for next year, that’s if they let him organize it again. It was great to hear though that Susan forgave him in the end. Remember for next time to read your story carefully and make sure you use speech marks so the reader can clearly see when each character is speaking.
    Keep up the great effort
    Mrs Baldwin (100WC team)

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