Finally we can make a start on the shed said bob where is the rest of the metal I need it now for the back of the shed said bob mate can you help me Joe yes I can said Joe finally it is all most finished the shed where is the back of my van can you get the screw driver from it. Thank you for helping me no problem said Joe all right see you later alligator would not won’t to be you bye. I have to go now.to be continued…!!!!
By Adam
Hello Adam!
Welcome to the 100WC. I’m intrigued to know what the next part would be as your story seems to have come to a sensible end. I expect if you were to read it through, you would be able to see where you could have popped some punctuation. It makes it easier for your readers to understand your writing & really enjoy it. It is super to see your work being shared on 100WC!
Dear Adam, that is a nice start of a story.I liked it……….you forgot to put in speech marks.From Jordan
Dear Adam nice story I really liked when you put to be continued from Lewis m