Megan’s 100 Word Challenge #4

Maddy! : |

“lets play guess my word my word starts with c” said Kate
“ok is it CROCODILE?” Maddy replied
“How did you guess”
“?”
“My word starts with p”
“Ok is it pepper?”
“No you silly wait your teddy bear is SOFT?”
“Yeah I don’t know how you forgot!”
2 Hours later

“ok I give up” monad Kate
“ It was orange!” yelled Maddy
“But orange dose not start with p!” Kate said
“ I know they don’t call me mad Maddy from wonderland for nothing!”
2 minutes later…
by Megan

2 thoughts on “Megan’s 100 Word Challenge #4

  1. Hello Megan,

    Firstly, thank you for highlighting the prompt words using bold. I was able to easily see they have been well used.

    I was impressed by your use of speech when sharing your story. Speech can help readers imagine themselves as part of the conversation. It can draw readers’ imaginations into a story. Well done.

    What a strange conversation you shared. It was only at the end I realised this could only be a story involving characters more at home in “Alice In Wonderland” or “Alice Through the Looking Glass”. Mad Maddy would most certainly be at home at the Mad Hatter’s tea party. Again, well done.

    While I can see the care you have taken with spelling and punctuation, there are some errors in setting out speech. Here is what I mean…
    “Let’s play Guess My Word. My word starts with C,” said Kate.
    “Ok, is it CROCODILE?” Maddy replied.
    “How did you guess?”
    Can you see the small changes?

    I hope you can continue entering the 100WC. With your imagination to create unusual stories, I suspect you have many more stories to share.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Dear Mr Mannell,
    thank you i did notice the small changes and thank you for noticing my ideas which are mostly about Alice in wonder land or known as (in my 100 wc’s) Maddy.
    From Megan

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