Pepper the orange crocodile forgot her soft fluffy jumper. She realized it when she got to school. So she quickly ran back home and got it, she got back to school just in time. But she was always getting teased because she was so tall and she ate smelly fish. They teased her about her name, how her face was so long and her legs were a bit small. One day a childs footy was stuck in a tree no one could get it not even the teachers. But pepper had a go she got the ball every one loved her she finally got friends.
By Fate
I love your work .Next time you can put in some more adjectives.I liked how you described the crocodile.
I like the way you used all the chosen words in the first sentence, Fate.
What a good idea to call the crocodile ‘Pepper’.
You have thought about what it is like to be teased and I am glad the story has a happy ending.
Well done.