Once upon a time there was a boy called Luke and a princess called Lola. Luke was an elf and he had a bow and arrow. Sometimes he would go out sometimes to hunt beasts and use the blood and skin to create different types of arrows. Lola has a mansion to herself and a butler called Bob. Sometimes she would go to other places like the Avignon Bridge to look in the sea and look at sea animals. But one day there was a beast on the Avignon Bridge. To be continued…
from luke
I really like this imaginative story and wonder what the beast was that appeared on the Avignon bridge? Is your story set in the past? I wonder if you could find a different opening sentence rather than using ‘Once upon a time?’ – I feel this would make your story even better. Jane Team 100WC Barnsley UK
Hey Luke
great story i would like to be Luke the beast slayer because he sounds awesome Luke better slay that beast and become a legend also Luke should marry princess Lola
from Josh